Thursday, April 16, 2020
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Hi Emma, well done on posting some writing that you've done. I like that you said you heard 'boom', that is called onomatopoeia and means you are adding a sound effect. Maybe you could give us a little bit of information about what you had to do for the writing task.
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Kia ora Emma, well done on this descriptive piece of writing and great job using speech marks. What made you choose to write about a thunder storm?
ReplyDeleteMiss Williamson
Hi Emma, what a good story you have written. I like how you have used some interesting words. Mrs Fanning
ReplyDeleteHi Emma, great writing, it is very descriptive.
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