I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss McLeod. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, May 1, 2020
The morning.
In the morning me and Riley are play with the lego it was saw much fun there were three bad guys they were robbing the cars at nighttime everyone was a sleep...smash boom we all wake up.wot was that.we all looked outside we see racing cars zoom.I kept the pin it hit the tyre and it popped wot did you do to your car I can replace it you on right.The next day I replace the tyre it saw all good.The end.
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hi Emma i like your work that you did keep up the good work
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